Well I said to everyone there is a monster under my bed but mum said
That i am just a bird it mean that am just a kid so i say ok then one.Night
I we in bed but then it went black the walls were black blood was come down and out.Of a door i big fat red blood on hess body red i look at him and he was at the top of.The roof his eyes look just at me i said hello and just then i was at my bed and then i big monster the one i just seen he said hey little girl.So i runny into my mum and dads room then when i went to look there was no one there the big monster was just a the door when my mum and dad came and said what the why is there a big monster there.and then more monster came out one two there was one.
And he seen the car so he jump on it mum said hey you get off my car
He got of the car but then he was coming at as i on the floor when crying
Mum said to get up and stop crying dad got a gun then run he had two
Shots one shot got one in the back he we to he went down the
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Hey there buster!
ReplyDeleteI really like the story since I am a big fan of horror.
SOme of the grammar could be fixed along with puncuation and remembering to uppercase your I's
-Salamander (Jeneva)